firstaudrina

This was a really lovely read. I think you did a good job of making Blaine real and not making him too perfect or too flawed. Things that I wished I'd seen on my screen - like the mutual apologies at the cafe (especially the phrasing you used that expressed Kurt's frustration without making him look justified in his crappy comments) or the gas pains thing that turned from a sort of funny but kind of mean thing to hear into a funny but not really mean back and forth with mutual good-natured insulting - made me happy. There were other moments too that I thought worked really well as a character exploration of Blaine without turning into plotless navel-gazing. Really nice work and I'm glad you'll be writing more. I look forward to all further instalments :)