firstaudrina

Congratulations for the great job. Being not an English native, I am very impressed by the ease with which you adopted Edith's style. I've read The Age of Innocence, and I must say you were able to stick to the original story and yet adapt it to the new characters impeccably. I especially loved when you couldn't retain yourself from drifting away with the dialogue as Dan and Blair interacted. This shows they truly have a soul of their own, which remains unaltered even when they are in a different space and time like they have been in your story. I hope you will update soon! Cami.